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These would be the variations you wanted to see ;) greetings Dagmar

Great, thank you very much! The last 3 things you've uploaded are the same, right?

Oh no, they're not! The icon is different. Thanks for being so thorough :)

This is the proposal revision based on your last feedback with different type font combinations to choose ;) greetings Dagmar

Wow perfect, you're fast! Great to be able to see and compare it this way. Can you also show me this using the more elegantly ("thinner") shaped icon?

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Just got your message, I just prepared two more versions with a slimmer image sign in combination with two different typos, maybe you like these ones even more, we'll see...
Looking forward to your reply, best regards

Thank you! I like the new (less chubby) icon, I actually feel it balances the whole better. I also really like the font you have used (thicker one) in option 2, since the thickness of the "Whole New You" balances very well with "thinner" version of the icon. Nevertheless, I would still like to see a differentiation in line thickness to make it different elements contrast better, but in option 1, where you have used a bold font, it seems like the font type has changed. The letters are more narrow-shaped, which feels less warm or optimistic. Can you propose another logo with a similar (more chubby) font as you've used before, in bold, with the thin logo? Also, minor detail, can you make the 'T' in "towards a healthy, energised and thriving life" a caption instead of a lower case letter, so that it reads: "Towards a..." Thank you!

Thank you! I like the new (less chubby) icon, I actually feel it balances the whole better. I also really like the font you have used (thicker one) in option 2, since the thickness of the "Whole New You" balances very well with "thinner" version of the icon. Nevertheless, I would still like to see a differentiation in line thickness to make it different elements contrast better, but in option 1, where you have used a bold font, it seems like the font type has changed. The letters are more narrow-shaped, which feels less warm or optimistic. Can you propose another logo with a similar (more chubby) font as you've used before, in bold, with the thin logo? Also, minor detail, can you make the 'T' in "towards a healthy, energised and thriving life" a caption instead of a lower case letter, so that it reads: "Towards a..." Thank you!

Hi,
attached three new variations with the changes you requested ;) The sign is smaller and I made the grey a little lighter in this version. Let me know, if this is going in the right direction, kind regards, Dagmar

Hi! Thanks very much. I really like the second option. Could you upload it separately? Also, what I think could still improve is a slight and subtle difference in thickness between the different elements of the logo. Right now, all elements (icon, Whole New You and subtext), have the same boldness. It would be nice if you can play around with different line thicknesses. E.g., I'd like 'Whole New You' to stand out a bit more from the other elements, and I guess increasing its line thickness slightly (so it should be very subtle), would help greatly. Can you propose some more alternatives? Thank you!

Also, minor detail, can you make the 'T' in "towards a healthy, energised and thriving life" a caption instead of a lower case letter, so that it reads: "Towards a..."

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Hi Dagmar, my preference goes to this design, especially because it's less dark (more greyish), and I like the icon you have used in this version best (without the extra circle in the centre). Some things that would optimise the logo are: 1) Can you please change the sentence in "towards a healthy, energized and thriving life" 2) Can you make the overall logo (all elements together) look a bit less bulky, more subtle? Maybe you can make the font a little smaller, and the icon as well, since I feel it's quite big and takes up quite some space compared to the rest of the logo. Thanks!

Hi Dagmar, my preference goes to this design, especially because it's less dark (more greyish), and I like the icon you have used in this version best (without the extra circle in the centre). Some things that would optimise the logo are: 1) Can you please change the sentence in "towards a healthy, energized and thriving life" 2) Can you make the overall logo (all elements together) look a bit less bulky, more subtle? Maybe you can make the font a little smaller, and the icon as well, since I feel it's quite big and takes up quite some space compared to the rest of the logo. Thanks!

Good morning wnyblog,
thank you for your rating, attached three more versions based on the previous proposal. If you have further wishes to improve the design, please let me know, kind regards, Dagmar Lange

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Hi and thanks for your submission! Overall, the logo feels a bit too light. I like the use of the colors (mainly the green shade), and the font used. My preference goes to a white background, as in the top example, but the text is quite difficult to read. I prefer a different object, since I don’t see the link between the four different parts with my blog (I could e.g. imagine an object where 3 areas are connected, seeing the interaction between the three components of health I will discuss). As for the tagline, please use the sentence used in my briefing: “Food for thought for a healthy, energized and thriving life” instead of the "my personal journey", since the blog will reflect on much more than just that. Thanks!

Hi! You can also choose to leave the tagline out of the logo, as I realise it takes up quite some space, and focus on "Whole New You" and (optionally) an object instead. Thank you!