It all started with an idea...

Hi!

This is my last possible submission as the limit is 15. I hope that now I understood correctly. I removed the ball and left only the trace of a "track".

If you feel that my design is the one you would like to have, I can make some changes afterwards, if you have any.

Thank you and looking forward hearing from you,

Best Regards,
Zane

Some little adjustments - text under in orange colour scheme to match the saturn and different colours in the background.

Regards,

Zane

Zane, please remove the bol. i didnt ask for a saturn. i asked for something like a saturn. So the bright colors that you used is the centre and around that i want a line what looks like a skate track.
i like the line that you used in the first ones.

And here I made even brighter colours in the background.

Regards,
Zane

And here is the part that goes around the saturn in blue colour scheme. And name Festival bigger and at the bottom.

Regards,
Zane

Hello!

Tried to make the idea with saturn.
What do you think about this?

Regards,
Zane

Hello,

To create the skating rank as a 3d element that could fit in this design I came up with an idea making it in lines. In that way I can make this 3 D effect. To make it clear that it is skating rank I included also skate, but if you feel that its not necessary, let me know.
I made the both names bigger so they would stand out more and put name Festival behind splash.
Looking forward to hearing from you,

Best Regards,
Zane

Did you changed the colours? Could you make the colors more powerfull?
Please remove the skate. aswell as the rank. it looks like a paperclip.
Please make a new one, like the colors are planet Saturn and the ring is the rank.
Good luck

Hello,

Thank you for your feedback.
Here I created the figure that would associate with skate track. Also it brings all logo together creating stroke.

Let me know what you think about this kind of idea.

Regards,
Zane

In the Netherlands our skating track is like an athletics track. :-)
I would like to see the track in a 3d way. if possible.
The first line (festival) in the front and the other line behind the colorsplash.
And the background in white please.
good luck

And here are brighter colours and white colour font for festival - so it wouldn't disappear in all the colours.

Regards,
Zane

Hello,

Here is the version with brighter colours in the baclground!

Regards,
Zane

Your on the right way. But im douting about the skate. (it looks like its a skating event. but it isn't).
Could you remove it and replace it for a skatetrack?
Thank you

And here is an option with colour splash around the logo.

Regards,
Zane

Nice!! Could you add more powerfull colors to the background?
thanks

*different background and font for FESTIVAL.

Regards,
Zane

*different background

Zane

Hello,

Thank you for your feedback,

I made some examples with the background to the logo, so you could use also this kind of version.

I will provide you with another background option and then with the same background and little bit stronger font for - Festival.

Regards,
Zane

Here I changed a little bit skates to give them look of speed skating skates. In the previous design I went for more abstract skating skate, maybe this one suits better?

Regards,
Zane

Its looking good. But it doesn't bring a festival atmosphere.
Maybe you can add a bachground with more colors?
Good examples are:
http://nl.szigetfestival.com/
http://www.noppop.nl/
https://www.pinterest.com/pin/518688082058881820/

Good luck

Hello,

To create the associating with speed skating I created the skate and the line behind it to associate with a rink.

I made it in blue colour scheme so it would associate with ice and speed.

The main name - Baanbrekend I kept bold and strong and the Festival in lighter font so it would work in harmony in whole design.

If you have some changes in mind of not hesitate to contact me.

Looking forward hearing from you,

Regards,
Zane