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hello dsm

here's the new revisions :)

if there's anything you want to improve don't hesitate to message me.

regards
philart

looks good

hello DSM

here's the revisions pls. check thank you for feedback.
you are welcome for any revisions don't
hesitate to message me.

best regards
philart

nice, can you revert to the color type you used in the 1st mock up of this design? blue & red..

here's the new revisions thank you for feedback

thanks, looks better, small note: can you add some spacing to bottom logo? words look a bit compacted..right vehicle>right place>right time, maybe just add a space inbetween each, small tweak, what if you added the roadway to also the S curve?

by the way 'Foresight' not 'forsight'..spelling

new revisions

thanks, need to have "&" instead of " and"

not sure the current way the demand and supply curves look, I'd recommend to tweak them somehow to look better..

'F' font on foresight looks strange...

hello DSM pls check my new revisions.

with roadway on letter D

thanks for submitting another.
kind of looks like devil horns : (
make slimmer maybe...a bit less gloss, make "&" neutral color, not red or blue,
try > instead of + for motto, the car/clock wheel was want the team really liked about this design, maybe enhance..? i saw a gauge on another design, maybe add?

yeah fist time that is seen are the horns, takes away for the cool car, diffuse the horns lol

hello DSM

here's my revisions yes your alright the the three line it's a symbol of a speed and pls check the tagline below.

thank you for feedback

best regards
philart

thanks for the revision

Can you please change the "And" to "&"

Can you try making the demand supply curves look like a roadway as others have done?

would you be able to add a bit of gloss to the letters?

really like the clock/wheel idea on the speeding car

can you play with the angle of the demand/supply curves?

with demand and supply graph and simple road on letter M. to make tight.

looks like a house, not a fan of this one..

with demand and supply and auto and a clock on the wheel for a right time.

regards
philart

like this, what is the blue picture next to the curve? try taking it off and '&' instead of and

is it wind/vehicle speed? try changing the design a bit

This design has gotten positive feedback from the team: Like the car/auto design, like the clock/wheel to signify time, but do need to incorporate/add "Foresight that" delivers right vehicle right place right time'

try some other mock ups based on this concept/design to strengthen your position

Can you add foresight that delivers...Right vehicle...

here's my revisions

what is the triangle for?

The triagle meaning is a road imagine you are driving on the road stands for the right place and right time.

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like the concept, maybe tighten the design

Try a different font for the initials, maybe gray color for 'M'; try: Right Vehicle + Right Place + Right time, add some style to the demand +supply curves

with speed meters and wings automotive.

with demand and supply chart.

thanks, but looking for something more innovative

other idea

thanks but what we're going for

i mean not what we're going for

clean logo design a road on letter S

thanks but the 's' doesn't really stand out as a road, not feeling this design, try a supply/demand chart idea as a base...