I'm not sure I understood everything in your previous comment so I did several tests. Is this what you wanted?
logo + corporate identity naturopathic practice
- Contest holder: GezondZwangerPraktijk
- Category: Logo & stationery
- Status: Ended
- Files: File 1
Start date: 01-11-2016
Ending date: 21-11-2016
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Hi Laurine, That's not what i meant :D I meant I liked the logo where the figures stand lose from each other. I like the logo's, but I don't love them. Maybe you can take a look to my current logo (www.gezondzwangerpraktijk.nl). This logo is not what I want anymore (not serious), but it is very different from other naturopathic practices. Maybe you can integrate that idea in your design?

Hello,
Here the same proposals with the most balanced logo.
Laurine
I like the ones on the left, but maybe you can make the edges of the figures more fitted (so the fit in each other) and the lining less thick, but more soft (I don't know the right term in Englisch, but more like it's sketched, so less bright on the bottom of the figure, or like a wave)

Hello,
Two proposals for your logo.
Feel free to tell me what you think.
Laurine
Hi Laurine, I really like the idea of the 2 figures! Only, they seem out of balance. Maybe you can do something about it? I really like the letters and colours you used. Thanks for your input!